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The last thing you remember that night was tucking yourself into bed and closing your eyes. You trail away into your little dreamworld of yours, dreaming of all the things you wanted. Later that night you woke for some strange reason, feeling as cold as ever, not to mention the fact that it was winter. You decide to have a walk about in your room turning your light on. You looked out you window and, to your surprise, the window was covered in frost. You opened your window to look outside and the whole street was covered in a thick layer and pure white snow.

"Wow" You said in amazement, as you remembered that only just yesterday it was clear and empty.

"You like my work?" said a voice who you don't seem to recognize.

You banged your head against the window as you jumped at the sound of his smooth and comforting voice.

"Careful" he said, chuckling.

"Where are you?  And who are you?" As you rub your head and popping back into your bedroom. You had plenty more questions to ask but they were the main things you wanted to know.

A boy's head popped up at the window slowly revealing himself. His big blue eyes and his pure, white spiky hair had you hypnotized. He came in through the window and was standing in your room. You got a full look at him. He had a blue jumper, with little designs of frost round his neck and his hood going down his sleeves. He had leather slacks that were ripped just above his ankles. He was so skinny. He was also holding this strange staff sort of thing, looked like a big long stick with a 'G' shape at the end of it. He seemed slightly familiar.

He finally broke the silence.

"Nice room" he said

You weren't quite sure what to say next. He hadn't told you his name or how he was able to get as high as your room and get in through your bedroom window.

"I'm Jack" he finally said "Jack Frost"

You remember a 'Jack Frost' in your life before but you can't recall, but  then something in your mind finally clicked. You remembered how your mum used to tell you stories about 'Jack Frost' when you were younger and how he controlled the winter weather and caused mischief.

"Jack Frost?!  Th-the actual Jack Frost?!  How is that possible? I thought you were just a myth?!"

"Who said I was a myth" he chuckled, looking a bit shocked

"M-my mum" you whispered

He walked a bit closer to you, overlooking you. He had a smug look on his face, then he finally whispered,

"Tell your mum she's wrong"

You stared into his big, sky-blue eyes, being mesmerized, forgetting everything he just said. You blink a couple of times remembering that you WERE looking at him. He turned round and started walking towards your window.

"Wait!" you called. "Prove it, prove that your the real Jack Frost, the one that I know"

Jack stood still. He turned his head looking at you. Yet again he came closer to you. He grabbed your wrists, feeling his ice cold skin, then your hands sink into his. He pulled you over to the window, jumping on top of the mantelpiece.

"W-w-wait" you said. "What are you planning to do?" seeming a bit worried.

"You'll see" he replied with a cheeky grin.

He pulled you out of your window but you immediately grab onto the first thing you see when your outside. Standing on the outer ledge still holding his hand, you look down then you look back up at him who was already in the air and flying.

"Aw, you scared?" he said in a sarcastic, baby voice. But then he saw your worried  looking face and came closer to you. He hugged you, trying to reassure you.

"Don't worry, I'm an expert" he whispered into your ear.

Grinning, he grabbed your waist, then he slowly, but surely, lifted you up and started to fly away from your bedroom. You couldn't believe what you were seeing and feeling. Seeing all the neighboring house fly past you and also feeling his smooth but cold skin. You had noticed that he hadn't asked your name, you too scared scared to say.

"There you go!" he said in a comforting voice.

He landed in a forest with plenty of tall trees and small rivers. He dropped you beside a small flowing river.  Jack let go of you and walked over to the river.

"Watch" he said.

He then touched the top layer of the water with his staff and the river slowly started to turn into clear ice. Your eyes widened in shock. He started to laugh at the look on your face.

"Woah" you breathed.
"Do you believe me now?"
"I already believed when we started flying"

He chuckled. But there was still something stuck in his head

"You don't remember do you?" he said walking towards you with his staff resting on his shoulder.

"Remember what?" you said suspiciously

"These woods, the river, the snow"

You suddenly remembered what he was talking about, it was like someone hitting you in the head and remembering every single second of your life.

"Oh my god" you manage to breathe out. "How could I have forgot, you were there, in the forest, when I got lost, you helped me get home." you said.

"But then you forgot all about me, moved house never saw me again" he had a sad look on his face, looking down at the snow

You walk over to him, giving him a hug. The pure joy you feel when he hugs you back even tighter.

"I'll never, ever forget about you again"

He looks at you, foreheads touching, he goes in and gives you a kiss.
Saw a couple of X readers and wanted to make oe of my own, so here it is!
enjoy :)
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:iconlayla-mindora:
layla-mindora Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AAAAAAAAAAAAWWWW cute!!^-^
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HIKARUANDKAORUSSIS Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014
CUTE!
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Neryss-Veletz Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014
Well, THAT escalated quickly. :)
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Cupcakez55 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2013  Hobbyist
awwwww *dies of cuteness* 
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2pfemitaly Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
d'aw <3
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
aaawwww!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
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Rin-Lombardi Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013
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Mookie-Mooks Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconepicclapplz:
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Hetalia1219 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Love it!!
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PrincessJalava Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Love it!! Goodness. You're going to make me fall more in love with him if you keep this up xD
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Buni-chi Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Soo cute! ^////^
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xXDanielPhantomXx Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww! so cute!!!
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veekaizhanez Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good job for representing Jack Frost as romantic guy for the girl reader~`~
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sy62697 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Writer
:iconcraiplz: AHMAIGAWD! Th-this was so amazing! So adorable! So fantastic! So-So-! :iconhandspazzplz: I absolutely love this! I love how calm and relaxed he seemed at first, and then the sadness, I just :iconcryforeverplz: THE FEELS!!
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littleshadow3 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Artist
falling for him at sight and words!!!
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kairiandroxas101 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's soo cute! I reall like it.
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xxxWARGIRLxxx Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Don't worry, I'm an expert" he whispered into your ear.

WARNING!!!! DIRTY THOUGHTS LEAKING INTO MY BRAIN!!!!! XDDDD lolz it was good though
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Roozilla13 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awwww X3 That's so sweet and fluffeh~ I lurv fluffeh things. And Jack's hair qualifies as fluffeh...and so does snow....just not ice BI XDD
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crazyforchocobos Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
This is really cute! I like how it gives Jack and the reader a backstory
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crazyforchocobos Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
What's a "jumper" is that what a sweatshirt is called in england?
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ClaireBlack99 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
pretty much, im from scotland tee hee
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crazyforchocobos Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Okay! thanks! I'm part scottish myself.
Over here on my side of the pond a jumper is a short denim overall dress.
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kagomeandsesshomaru9 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist
LOVE IT!
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NekoKay-chan Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsqueeeeplz: I love this! So cute~! >w<
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RjDg-RkSb Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Perfect... Now i can sleep Well .. Good night x)
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BronzeValim Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student
I knew someone was going to make one of these! Cool!
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sisssssters Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Kyaa! Hehe This is awesome kuma!~
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tsayumi Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
nya! :heart:
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CielsGirl123 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is so cute~~~~ >w<
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chipmunkmonster6 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i feel loved
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Soraply11 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Love it!! :iconomgsocuteplz:
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TNBCFreak220 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Filmographer
D'awww~
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unicornomics Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012   General Artist
Nice job keeping Jack in character
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ClaireBlack99 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
shall i do more, continuing from this story or will i do the ame topic but different story line
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SavannahFrost Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Continue from this story, I like what you've got going here :)
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Jiggly-Fat Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
more please do more
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leonluver11 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
omg... I love it! It's so cute! <3
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AwkwardApartment Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
We also appear to have the same name; Claire's unite! :iconderpnessplz:
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ClaireBlack99 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
whooooo yeaahhhhh
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AwkwardApartment Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A Jack Frost rafter fanfic! :la:
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Minty-Ice Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heheh~ See? I told you that you should've have uploaded this to deviantART!~

Already 66 views, and 12 favourites~
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ClaireBlack99 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
thanks soooo much <3
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Minty-Ice Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome~ :3
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HorrorFanGirl365 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Artist
:iconomgsocuteplz: :heart: :heart:
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BitterxBelle Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
Aww, this cute! :D
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The-phoenix-Miya Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Love this!!! I've become almost obsessed with jack first x reader fanfiction
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Awwww!
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frost-witch Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
cool!
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